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Zabuza-Haku poems by ~Zabuku-kun:iconZabuku-kun:

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"Haku"

I was a monster
I was a freak
I was an outcast
My future was bleak

He looked in my eyes
and saw a weapon
Then he embraced me
and he took me in

I live for one life
that's precious to me
Not for my own life
but the one who did see

I was a monster
I was a freak
But he truly loved me
His approval I seek

"Zabuza"

I grew up as an outcast
I was always shoved aside
So how is it so strange
that I live for myself

No one ever loved me
They laughed, taunted, and jeered
So if I try to love myself
Why is it so weird

Put yourself into my shoes
Feel my hurt and pain
Until then don't you judge me
As I stand in the rain

Only one soul dared to love me
He loved me through and through
He risks his life to love me
He loves me through and through

It's this one soul I'd die for
For this one boy I'll fight
For he dared to love me
I love him with all my might
©2006-2009 ~Zabuku-kun
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Poems inspired by Zabuza and Haku from Naruto.
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~Rabiji:iconRabiji: Oct 1, 2006, 3:18:52 PM
soo nice!
i like it alot!
~Zabuku-kun:iconZabuku-kun: Oct 2, 2006, 10:23:48 PM
Thank you. More to come in the future. ^^
Mood: Love ~Unownpowers:iconUnownpowers: Nov 25, 2006, 9:07:08 PM
Nicely done.

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:snowflake: “You see, it is only through the eyes of others that our lives have any meaning…” :snowflake:
- Haku
~Zabuku-kun:iconZabuku-kun: Nov 26, 2006, 4:21:32 AM
Thank yas. Much obliged.

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
~TempestTwist:iconTempestTwist: Dec 30, 2006, 2:55:37 PM
beautiful and flowing like the river, nice job. maybe we can expect some comparing poems between naruto and gaara in the future??? they are pretty alike after all.

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-Sarcasm isn't an attitude, it's an ART.
-American by birth, cowgirl by the grace of God!!
-I'm strange, maybe even crazy, but there's never a dull moment...
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~Zabuku-kun:iconZabuku-kun: Dec 30, 2006, 3:06:23 PM
Maybe. We'll see how influences take to me. Thank you much for the comment.

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
~Zabuku-kun:iconZabuku-kun: Dec 30, 2006, 3:06:33 PM
Maybe. We'll see how influences take to me. Thank you much for the comment.

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
~TempestTwist:iconTempestTwist: Dec 30, 2006, 3:31:13 PM
sure they rocked, and yay

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-Sarcasm isn't an attitude, it's an ART.
-American by birth, cowgirl by the grace of God!!
-I'm strange, maybe even crazy, but there's never a dull moment...
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