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I see your face before me
But only in my dreams
I feel like I’m surrounded
By everyone but you

I try so hard
And push so much
But in the end
It’s not enough

I want to be there for you
But still I’m pushed away
Even as you cry for help
You don’t want me to stay

You’d rather someone else be there
Even though they’re false
But just because of who they are
It makes them better than me

All I am is a shadow
A memory in the dark
A thought in the back of your head
That really has no weight

It’s all so true, you can’t deny
The obvious, the facts
I feel like I’m surrounded
By everyone but you
©2007-2009 ~Zabuku-kun
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:iconjadethepredator:
Damn you and your thought-inducing random poems! I don't wanna think! :cries:

Well written, though. Makes you feel bad and sympathize with the "speaker."

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SARCASM
It beats killing people

I laugh at your misfortune cookies! Bwahahaha! :pointandlaugh:
:icontempesttwist:
nice and random, just how i like my poems

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-Sarcasm isn't an attitude, it's an ART.
-American by birth, cowgirl by the grace of God!!
-I'm strange, maybe even crazy, but there's never a dull moment...
:iconzabuku-kun:
Heh. <.< Yeah. Darn those silly things known as emotions.

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
:iconzabuku-kun:
o_o; I sorry Rayne Rayne. <.< I just kinda wrote it, and so I was like "Oh. I haven't posted anything for a while. So I'll post it."

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
:icontempesttwist:
ha ha ha ha ha!! lol

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-Sarcasm isn't an attitude, it's an ART.
-American by birth, cowgirl by the grace of God!!
-I'm strange, maybe even crazy, but there's never a dull moment...
:iconjadethepredator:
No worries! I like it. :)

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SARCASM
It beats killing people

I laugh at your misfortune cookies! Bwahahaha! :pointandlaugh:
:iconzabuku-kun:
I knows. =P

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
:iconif-only:
Curiosity has killed this Cat.

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To this, she sighed... And leaned back into her chair..

This; this would surely kill her.
:iconzabuku-kun:
Rawrity. <.<

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."

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