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Invisible by ~Zabuku-kun:iconZabuku-kun:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Human Nature > Open


Invisible

Not to be seen, not to be noticed
Even if I’m right in your face
Not a word is heard, my presence unfelt
I’m nothing but a shadow on the wall

I could scream at the top of my lungs
In the middle of a crowded room
And no one would even know I was there
Forcing myself to bleed

I shiver in the cold, unnoticed by the masses
None would listen to me, none would help
All because I can’t be seen, I can’t be felt
I’m nothing but a shadow on the wall

It could be my fault, for staying in the back
But still I don’t wish to have so much attention
Perhaps just a glance, and maybe a wave
But I’m not good enough for those…
©2007-2009 ~Zabuku-kun
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Author's Comments

Poem. I wrote it.

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=mayahuskee Jan 21, 2007, 8:45:27 PM
I like it. =]

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i love you && youu.
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~JadeThePredator Jan 21, 2007, 8:53:17 PM
That's... about how I feel...

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SARCASM
It beats killing people

I laugh at your misfortune cookies! Bwahahaha! :pointandlaugh:
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~Zabuku-kun Jan 21, 2007, 9:36:54 PM
Thanks....

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
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~kitsune-taiyoukai Jan 22, 2007, 4:30:04 AM
<< >> :glomp: *Waves and huggles* =D See? Attention =D :heart: You're awesome. You put feeling behind your words =3

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Something Profound Belongs Here.
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~Anafiel Jan 22, 2007, 11:43:22 AM
~licks~

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There's only a few true vampires and no Cullens are on that list. Besides, Jareth the Goblin King is the only one who can pull off OMGMANSPARKLES!!! and still be considered believably wicked.
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~Zabuku-kun Jan 22, 2007, 1:05:53 PM
-Purrs and pets- Thanks Hun.

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
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~Zabuku-kun Jan 22, 2007, 1:13:29 PM
Hah. -Hugs back and pets- Silly Pickle ninja. Thanks. Penis. <3

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
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~Anafiel Jan 22, 2007, 2:00:31 PM
^^ it was a tasty poem! heheheh ~huggles~

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There's only a few true vampires and no Cullens are on that list. Besides, Jareth the Goblin King is the only one who can pull off OMGMANSPARKLES!!! and still be considered believably wicked.
:iconkitsune-taiyoukai:
~kitsune-taiyoukai Jan 22, 2007, 5:53:13 PM
=D :heart:

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Something Profound Belongs Here.
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