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"Fuck my luck"

Sometimes I feel I’ve lost my  luck
I try so hard, and yet can’t think
And that’s when I don’t give a fuck

Life’s been drained, pulled down by muck
I’m falling far, far past the brink
Sometimes I feel I’ve lost my luck

Within the circle of the world, I’m stuck
My mood will go up, then quickly sink
And that’s when I don’t give a fuck

Mixed feelings of jumping out before the truck
Or tainting blood with poison ink
Sometimes I feel I’ve lost my luck

Up and down my life will buck
Someone will break my repaired link
And that’s when I don’t give a fuck

I’d love to hold my head and duck
Forever lock myself beneath the sink
Sometimes I feel I’ve lost my luck
And that’s when I don’t give a fuck
©2007-2009 ~Zabuku-kun
:iconzabuku-kun:

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My friend said she'd be impressed by a Villanelle, so I wrote one just to try something new.

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:iconjadethepredator:
What's a Villanelle?

Nice poem, by the way :D

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SARCASM
It beats killing people

I laugh at your misfortune cookies! Bwahahaha! :pointandlaugh:
:iconzabuku-kun:
Go to Villanelle.

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
:iconkitsune-taiyoukai:
*Munches on lemon cake and nods some* Looks awesome =3 I'm glad you're trying out new styles =D *Offers some lemon cake*

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Something Profound Belongs Here.
:iconzabuku-kun:
Ooh. Yellow cake. -Drools, takes, and munches- :3

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
:iconkitsune-taiyoukai:
=D :heart:

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Something Profound Belongs Here.
:icontempesttwist:
nice thats how i feel about most of my life. must fave and write this one down

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-Sarcasm isn't an attitude, it's an ART.
-American by birth, cowgirl by the grace of God!!
-I'm strange, maybe even crazy, but there's never a dull moment...
:iconzabuku-kun:
Heh. <<; Don't take it to heart though. Think happy thoughts. :3

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And then as I heard Death knocking upon my door my heart grew warm and my eyes turned. There stood an Angel at my window, holding out her hand to me. "Come, fly with me, and I shall love you forever...."
:icontempesttwist:
heehee

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-Sarcasm isn't an attitude, it's an ART.
-American by birth, cowgirl by the grace of God!!
-I'm strange, maybe even crazy, but there's never a dull moment...

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